Stopping by Fields on a Snowy Afternoon
You've obviously been here
since my last visit.
and I like what you've done
But is it landscape
or is it art?
It's all so confusing
with you coming from the other side.
Calligraphy, there on the contours of the field,
scribbling in stalks and stacks
left from the fall,
are visible in the distant upper levels
of the canvas,
If it is a canvas.
But, it's the wash of thin white,
just a sift of snow,
(or is it white,)
that erases the visual samsara
and beckons to me from beyond the pale.
But I can't.
I am per pale.
We've been split like a schist.
Here I am and there you are,
parallel.
http://tinyfarmblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/01/win07_snowy_field_january1.jpg
http://www.ntoddblog.org/photos/winter/shadowsonthehille.html
I liked the visual of the snowy field with calligraphy made of "stalks and stacks."
ReplyDelete(I realize it might be read as a sad break-up poem; or, it could be read as someone deciding to not compromise their values just to be with another.)